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Conversation with a Sonnet II

Oh little song, your name's a bitter ruse.My heads a carved out melon for your rhyme.I stagger, metronomically confusedand beat your cadence out in desktop time.Perhaps I need poetic exorcism.A...

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I don't know why this has received no comments as of yet - it is iambically coherent & seems to be well rhymed (after only a quick read-through). I suppose the content is the problem. This...

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Re: Conversation with a Sonnet II

Norman, again a clever piece. I related to the beat-in-desktop-time (still gotta count it out occasionally) and liked the priest of prose. Got a little awkward with the inversions and slant rhymes...

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